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Simon Michael <simon@joyful.com>**20120428224323
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-        <li>you can select just the changes you want, and move them between repos in any order (Darcs automatically groups changes which depend on each other.)
+        <li>you can select just the changes you want, and move them between repos in any order (Darcs automatically groups changes which depend on each other).
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-        The simplicity of this "cherry-picking" is unique to Darcs and
-        <a href="http://projects.haskell.org/camp">camp</a>. Here is a
-        <a href="#" onclick="javascript:$('#video').slideToggle(); return false;" style="white-space:nowrap;">5-minute video</a>
-        showing it in action.
+        The simplicity of this "cherry-picking" is unique to Darcs (and
+        <a href="http://projects.haskell.org/camp">camp</a>). You can see it in action in this
+        <a href="#" onclick="javascript:$('#video').slideToggle(); return false;" style="white-space:nowrap;">5-minute video</a>.
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-$ <b>darcs whatsnew -s</b>  # list just the files
-$ <b>darcs whatsnew -sl</b> # list untracked files too (or: darcs status)</pre>
+$ <b>darcs whatsnew -sl</b> # just the files, untracked ones too (or: darcs status)</pre>
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-$ <b>darcs changes</b>      # (or: darcs log)</pre>
+$ <b>darcs changes</b>      # list commits in this repo (or: darcs log)</pre>
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-        Various kinds of undo:
+        Several kinds of undo:
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-$ <b>cd darcs</b>
-$ <b>echo > darcs.cabal</b> # oops, hope upstream will catch this...
+$ <b>cd darcs</b>           # enter the repo
+$ <b>echo > darcs.cabal</b> # oops, let's hope upstream will catch this...
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-$ <b>darcs help</b>      # list all commands and how to get more help</pre>
+$ <b>darcs help</b>      # show all commands and how to get more help</pre>